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Last saturday, i went to Monumen Pekalongan for joined kpop event that is Kpop Random Dance. This place is located in Bendan, West Pekalongan, Pekalongan City, Central Java 51119 in front of Asy-Syuhada Mosque
This is my second time for visited to Monumen Pekalongan. First time is when my parent persuaded me to went to Monumen Pekalongan because in there's an anniversary of Pekalongan City
Maybe is not any difference about Monumen Pekalongan at the first time i visited and second visited. This place is still large. This place is very strategic because in the middle of city, in front Asy-Syuhada Mosque, neared from gas station, train station, and mall.
I have to thing that i didn't like Monumen Pekalongan. First, you must go arround because the location is in the middle of city. Second, this place was not available an electric socket because i very needed for my speakers. Fortunately, my friend brought a portable speaker, its not needed electric socket
This event be held in this place because this place is large, can hold for many people. The event is start from 3 pm - 5 pm. I am very glad because the event is very crowded. Even if it started raining when we dance, it didn't ruin our spirits.
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BalasHapusRecount text is always use past tense .Such as,simple ,past continuous tense,past perfect tense or past perfect continuous tense.
BalasHapusSometimes he use simple present,It make this report text uncorrect .
I have to thing ->the corret one is I have two thing
I very needed -> very+V1 or very +much+v3.
The correct one is I very much needed
Maybe is not any different -> Maybe, there is no difference or It might not make any difference.
We have to use capital to the subject .Such as, I,name of person.
thank you for your correction Uwu
HapusWhat a fun experience! Love your writing.
BalasHapusI Like dance too, nice
BalasHapusIt seems fun! But you wrote 'i' (aku) using lower case, not using Capital. Be careful.. 😅
BalasHapusThat's a good experience!
BalasHapusHowever, may i correct your text.
From the sentence “ The event is start from 3 pm - 5 pm.”
I think it'd be better when you write “ The event is start from 3PM - 5PM.”
In Other side, this text is good. Keep writing!
My comments have been represented from previous comments. It's a good story bro...
BalasHapusso nice bim
BalasHapus